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Take all your tortures for a dime
I bet you’re just fading away now

You were just chasing after life

I bet ten thousand cigarettes could change what you think about the way this feels

You’re just fading away now

All my words could never change the way we feel
Have I ever thought of knowing truth?

You have that smoke cloud that follows me
Holding all my guilt in this sick complex

I’m inventing reasons why you’re really lucky
Because you never really could love me

I’m not proud about the energy you’ve provoked in me
Just to make me upset

But you’re just fading away now

Ten thousand cigarettes could never change what you think about the way this feels
You just need to think about knowing truth.

Just standing in the rain
I feel my limbs releasing the pain
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Author's Comments

Closure... finally, in my small way.


a·bate v
1. vti to lessen or make something lessen gradually (formal or literary)
2. vti to suppress or end a nuisance, act, or writ

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:iconlanegrita:
one of your best writings i think :) i love it cuz i can relate...great poem...

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So many feelings...but nothing to say...everything is written...it's better this way...
*RawEm0tion
:iconluna89:
thankyou, i am glad you can relate to my writing.. but sad that you can also..it sucks.

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This apple tastes so sweet,
It's too sweet
Now I must
Sleep
:iconconfusedloner:
so.. is this who and what i think it is about? very well written your style has changed n it's not one i'm used to but i like it..

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:iconjoelent:
this speaks to me.
[and i wish i could favourite all of your words!]

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:iconluna89:
The A word? haha, I mean Alex..it's about him..

meh, styles always changin.. i can't keep to one... that'd be borin!

--
This apple tastes so sweet,
It's too sweet
Now I must
Sleep
:iconluna89:
thankyou :)

--
This apple tastes so sweet,
It's too sweet
Now I must
Sleep
:icondarktraveler:
....


to be honest
if this is what i think its about
i think you probably expected too much.

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Ars Gratia Artis
:iconluna89:
I didn't expect anything out of him.

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This apple tastes so sweet,
It's too sweet
Now I must
Sleep

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